Sunday, May 12, 2013

The Trouble with Lords-Chapter 1



Everyone in Little Hetwidge thought Brownley Hall was haunted. It sat up on a lonely hill and overlooked the land as if a great giant was looking down waiting to stomp on anyone that got in the way. The castle was very ornate and quite beautiful. It had six levels that seemed to reach towards the sky and the middle three layers had balconies with roofs and archways that were six feet tall and about fifteen feet wide a person could actually stand out on during a rain storm and be dry. To the left of the castle walls was a tall tower that was gray and round and seemed to stretch towards the sky as if it were actually touching the clouds high above. Towards the top was another tiny tower that was also round and gray and had a top that looked like a witch’s hat. It had been used as a nursery and so many generations of children played in that room and looked out the tiny little window that faced the south and could look down on the village and to the lands below and dream of flying. There were a lot of trees in the front of the castle that blocked the entrance and from a distance the castle gave the impression of rising up from the trees.  The inhabitants inside were a different story all together. 
On really rainy days if a person stood at the bottom of the hill and looked up at the castle and saw the lightning hit just right they would swear that they saw ghosts flying high above the castle walls. For years there had been rumors that the Brantwells were indeed cursed and that every male would be doomed to live an unhappy life because of something that an ancestor had done in the past but no one was able to prove that story true. But as the years progressed the villagers believed in the rumor and so they sighed and said the Brantwell’s had once again been hit by the curse. 
Lord Jeffrey Brantwell, known to his friends as Brant, was the newest male to inherit the family fortune and the castle since his father had passed away six months ago. Not many people actually got to see him since he seemed to stay in the castle and never come down to the village, so the people figured that he was a monster and didn’t want to be seen. He was quite handsome and strong and his features showed he was a man. Even though he wasn’t classically handsome there was something about his personality that drew women to him to find out his secrets. But there were times when they feared if they figured out his secret that he would figure out theirs. He had lived a full life for thirty-two years and he was quite content. He was six foot three and had thick brown hair that had hints of grey at the temples and he had deep blue eyes that could pierce a person’s soul if they got too close. His nose wasn’t straight and had a ridge on the top where he had gotten into a fight in his youth and won. He was broad shouldered and his clothes fit him very well and when he went to London the tailors were always happy to see him.
He had many offers to attend functions in the tiny village but because he had just returned six months ago he didn’t feel like he had the time to attend such gatherings nor did he like social gatherings. So he just either sent notes of regret or ignored the invitations. Some of the villagers who thought they were the elite set thought of him as a snob and too big for his britches but some understood and they hoped that maybe they would be the lucky ones who broke through and had him attend one of their parties.

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